Good effort =)
You should have gone deeper into coloring, Anyone can figure out how to simply color different sides differently. And you should have explained 1 and 3 vanishing point drawing.
First skate movie ive seen that was not worth blamming =) nice work!
Next time though, you can update you last submission instead of reposting. Reposting defenetly brings your score down.
Didnt like the car
I like your drawing style, but i didnt like that car drawing, it didnt fit in, should have drawn it like the rest. And i didnt like the driving scene either, could have been much better with some more easing in/out and a litte more work put into it.
also, if i were you i would draw just a little bit less sketchy, like the backround biling when you see the car take of in the first scene.
The rest though was GREAT! =D
thats as constructive my critisism will be =P
as ive said, the car is meant to be different from the rest, and the first scene background, was alot neater, then i accidentaly delted all the colour, so i redid it really quikly without much care cos it had pissed me off -thanx anywho
The graphics could have been better, but the editing and writing was great =)
you got the talent, just why didnt you make it longer? if you make a submission like this with story, you can expect around 3+.
how did you make those buildings? did you trace them? seems like an awful lot of work drawing all those lines...
either way, great work!
Voice acting could have been better(I live in sweden), didnt really sound like a "Norrlands" guy or someone from that area, couse you sorta gave the feel of that area.
and ppl in Canade dont lock the door when they leave the house =) i guess they still have a bit of that mentality.
nice animations =)
the streets were sorta dull though, and those meters inside the car could move a little =)
never the less, great work!
that was one of the greatest fx ive ever seen! nice!
put in a backround, music, story, and more FX and you will have a 4+ stick movie =)
hope to see more of you soon!
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