Ohls's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[3D Drawing Tutorial]

Good effort =)

You should have gone deeper into coloring, Anyone can figure out how to simply color different sides differently. And you should have explained 1 and 3 vanishing point drawing.

[Skate Triligoy FIXED]

Nice =)

First skate movie ive seen that was not worth blamming =) nice work!

Next time though, you can update you last submission instead of reposting. Reposting defenetly brings your score down.

[Gone - Part 1]

Didnt like the car

I like your drawing style, but i didnt like that car drawing, it didnt fit in, should have drawn it like the rest. And i didnt like the driving scene either, could have been much better with some more easing in/out and a litte more work put into it.

also, if i were you i would draw just a little bit less sketchy, like the backround biling when you see the car take of in the first scene.

The rest though was GREAT! =D

thats as constructive my critisism will be =P

MephistonX responds:

as ive said, the car is meant to be different from the rest, and the first scene background, was alot neater, then i accidentaly delted all the colour, so i redid it really quikly without much care cos it had pissed me off -thanx anywho

["UR"]

great editing!

The graphics could have been better, but the editing and writing was great =)

[Bazooka Joe]

nice

you got the talent, just why didnt you make it longer? if you make a submission like this with story, you can expect around 3+.

[Bright Eyes]

nice buildings!

how did you make those buildings? did you trace them? seems like an awful lot of work drawing all those lines...

either way, great work!

[Nim's Winter tale]

great =)

Voice acting could have been better(I live in sweden), didnt really sound like a "Norrlands" guy or someone from that area, couse you sorta gave the feel of that area.

and ppl in Canade dont lock the door when they leave the house =) i guess they still have a bit of that mentality.

[Generic Car Chase]

nice animations =)

the streets were sorta dull though, and those meters inside the car could move a little =)

never the less, great work!

[TIA contest entry.]

great fx

that was one of the greatest fx ive ever seen! nice!

[Fight Study]

awesome!

put in a backround, music, story, and more FX and you will have a 4+ stick movie =)

hope to see more of you soon!