You should have gone deeper into coloring, Anyone can figure out how to simply color different sides differently. And you should have explained 1 and 3 vanishing point drawing.
I like your drawing style, but i didnt like that car drawing, it didnt fit in, should have drawn it like the rest. And i didnt like the driving scene either, could have been much better with some more easing in/out and a litte more work put into it.
also, if i were you i would draw just a little bit less sketchy, like the backround biling when you see the car take of in the first scene.
as ive said, the car is meant to be different from the rest, and the first scene background, was alot neater, then i accidentaly delted all the colour, so i redid it really quikly without much care cos it had pissed me off -thanx anywho
Ohls
All 25 flash Reviews
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars March 4, 2006
Good effort =)
You should have gone deeper into coloring, Anyone can figure out how to simply color different sides differently. And you should have explained 1 and 3 vanishing point drawing.
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars November 6, 2005
Nice =)
First skate movie ive seen that was not worth blamming =) nice work!
Next time though, you can update you last submission instead of reposting. Reposting defenetly brings your score down.
Rated 4 / 5 stars September 21, 2005
Didnt like the car
I like your drawing style, but i didnt like that car drawing, it didnt fit in, should have drawn it like the rest. And i didnt like the driving scene either, could have been much better with some more easing in/out and a litte more work put into it.
also, if i were you i would draw just a little bit less sketchy, like the backround biling when you see the car take of in the first scene.
The rest though was GREAT! =D
thats as constructive my critisism will be =P
as ive said, the car is meant to be different from the rest, and the first scene background, was alot neater, then i accidentaly delted all the colour, so i redid it really quikly without much care cos it had pissed me off -thanx anywho
Rated 4 / 5 stars September 18, 2005
One of the few good AS works with good graphics!
6 in interactivity since i dont really like soduko.
Great work! i really think your work deserves more score.
One of the few good AS works with good graphics!
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 16, 2005
great editing!
The graphics could have been better, but the editing and writing was great =)
Rated 2 / 5 stars September 11, 2005
good bit on the way.
what you need is to get nicer buttons, and more games, and make them harder! i got 400 points on my first try easily.
Rated 2 / 5 stars September 6, 2005
nice
you got the talent, just why didnt you make it longer? if you make a submission like this with story, you can expect around 3+.
Rated 3 / 5 stars August 17, 2005
nice!
my score:341
pretty nice game =) could be better grafics but its still good!
Rated 2 / 5 stars August 11, 2005
potential
make the fps maybe, 20-30, that will make the mouse alot more easy to use.
still good work!
Thanks for the suggestion, that's helpful.
Thanks.
Rated 4 / 5 stars August 10, 2005
great!
0 sound couse i cant hear the sound since i dont have any speakers.
this is a great mail, what i would improve if i where you thouh would be:
being able to skip that intro, or atleast being able to click "next" without waiting so long.
slower tank, and more turning ability.
still, great work!!